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Clean

2009-07-31T21:19:00.002+09:00

I went to KGU today because I had to clean in the club's room. I went to school at 1 o'clock. When I arrived in club's room, Kensuke doesn't forget a key of club's room. So I could not into the room. We waited him about one hour. He came to us after half an hour. Then, we cleaned in the room. There were a lot of things in the room. There were paint, a kitchen articles, and many nails here. We cleaned it hard. We cleaned it for about one hour. The room became very beautiful. The start settled very much after it had cleaned it though there were a lot of things. It sweated a lot because it was very hot today. However, I’m very glad because the room is very beautiful.

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Rechel, See you again.

2009-07-29T10:11:00.002+09:00

Rechel go back to Canada this morning. She is my friend. She stayed in Kumamoto for a year. 　She was teacher me a lot of things. For example when I'm very hungry, I should say “I have a botfly in my stomach." She was teaching me a lot of English. I like her very much. I want to see you again soon her.

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Chihuahua

2009-07-19T23:58:00.000+09:00

I went to the pet shop with my friend afternoon. There was a chihuahua there. The chihuahua was pure-white, and very small. It was very cute. I want to keep this Chihuahua because the dog was looking at me by large eyes. This chihuahua was born in May. This dog was obedient and cute. If I can keep the dog some time, I want to this chihuahua.

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Sanpo

2009-07-15T23:11:00.000+09:00

This picture is my friends of the circle to which I belong. I belong to the walking club. It name is Sanpo. There are about 50 people in the circle. She is Rachel that it is at the center in picture. She is 22 years old who is from Canada. She said that she would very like this circle. I was glad to hear it. She go back to Canada on July 29. So it is very sad for us. I want to go to Canada to meet her some time.

Rachel, see you again! I like you. Thank you♡

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Pasta and Pizza

2009-07-15T22:51:00.003+09:00

I went to the town with my friend of a part-time job today. I bought two clothes there. The clothes were very cute. And we went to the restaurant. We ate pasta and the pizza there. It was very delicious. We became full stomachs. We go back to friend's house. Then, my friend gave me the cake because it is my birthday yesterday. It was very happy for me. I spend very nice day. I thought that my birthday of this year was able to be celebrated from a lot of my friends and my family. So I was very happy.

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Happy Birthday

2009-07-14T23:53:00.001+09:00

Today is my birthday. I become 21 years old. I felt that it was very early that 20 years old finished. I usualy went to the school at morning. And I took the two classes in afternoon. today. I went to restaurant with my friend after the school. The place where we had eaten meal was very fashionable. We ate a lot of dishes. My stomach was very filled. I got the present from my friend. It was a key case. I was very glad. It was a very happy day today. I want to study hard more. And I wanted to make an effort to fulfill the dream.

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SUSHI

2009-07-13T21:47:00.000+09:00

I went to the Crea with my friends of a circle today. Member is Reona, Nastuki, Tougo, and me. We ate the sushi there. Everyone ate a lot of the sushi. After having eaten the sushi, we ate ice. Therefore, we became a full stomach very much. I go back to my house at nine o'clock. I saw K-1 in my room. I like player kishenko. He is 22 years old. He is good-looking because it is very strong though it is young. To our regret, he has been defeated. But he was very strong. Today is very interesting because K-1 made me excited. It is very fun.

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The Bon festival

2009-07-11T21:25:00.001+09:00

The relative gathered in my house today, because it was the Bon festival. It gathers in my house once a year. The relative is my uncle's brother. It came by about 15 people in my house today. I prepared meal with mother in the morning. It was very tired for me because I had to make a lot of washes. However, I was glad to have said that everyone was delicious. My cousin came in my house, and they celebrated of my birthday at night. My birthday is the same as my uncle. Therefore, the fire of the candle of the cake was put out by my uncle and me. The cake was very delicious. I went to work a part-time job after dinner. It became tired very much because it had worked from 9 o'clock to 12 PM today. However, it was very happy today.

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BR1-14 TINKERS FARM

2009-07-11T18:38:00.000+09:00

It is 1800 and Jenny and Sam Tinker arrive in the United States of America. Sam and Jenny are English, but now they are starting a new life in America. The tinkers say goodbye to all their friends. They are looking for a job because they don’t have any money. They get a job in Jack Crane's farm. Jenny makes a new friend Blue Sky in Crane's farm. Blue Sky is Indian girl. There is Indian's village next to the Crane's farm. Jenny often goes to the village, and she starts to learn some Indian words. In Crane's farm, Sam and Jenny are unhappy. They want to work in their farm, but they don’t have any land and any money. One day, Jenny saves Indian children's life. The Indian village Chief, Silver Cloud is very happy and the Indians are giving Sam and Jenny own farm...'TINKERS FARM'. They can really start a new life.

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Essay 6 My favorite movie

2009-07-09T22:49:00.004+09:00

My favorite movie is 'Ms. Kanna is big success.' This movie is very interesting. It is Korean movie. I watched the movie with my friend in the library of the school. This story was impressed to be very interesting. I have cried because I’m impressed. This is a story to which certain one woman transforms.

She is famous singer. I like her voice very much because she sings in a clear voice. So her voice is very beautiful. But she is very stout who always is a very blunder. So she is a stagehand. She always works the back of a stage. She wants to sings the front of a stage. She did the decision to become beautiful. And, it underwent plastic operation on all of her body. Her decision has strengthened very much. She underwent plastic operation on the whole body and became beautiful. She was glad and very pleased. She saw her who became beautiful and had confidence. And, she sang. She sang on the stage now, but she sang back in the stage in the old days. She sang in front of the fan. However, she is concealing her plastic operation in old times. Nobody can say. She speaks on a big stage before the power of people. It was confessed that I was fat and had undergone plastic operation in old days. A lot of people were very surprised at her confession. Her confessing however made them impressed. It applauded in her honest confession and all people there applauded her.

I was very impressed to see this movie. I became feelings said holding out after this movie had been seen very. I was very impressed to see this movie. I became feelings said holding out after this movie had been seen very. I want to become obedient like her. This movie is very interesting.

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July 4

2009-07-04T23:52:00.001+09:00

I went to eat meal with my friends in local today. One person is working. Another person is studying the medical treatment in the special school. We met at the alumni association that was in January. I was very glad to meet my friends. All kindergartens are also the same as us. Therefore, we told the story at the kindergarten. I want to meet everyone again.

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July 3

2009-07-03T23:46:00.000+09:00

I went to the town with my friend today. And, we drank in the bar at 8 PM. We went to the bar for the first time. The bar was near the center of the town, and was a bar where atmosphere was very good. It was very interesting today.

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July

2009-07-01T21:32:00.000+09:00

It is July 1 today. July started today. I want to work hard this month. I turn 21 years old on July 14. 20 years old was very early. It works hard study more when turning 21 years old. It is necessary to think about my future at this time and I want to work hard the self-analysis.

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BR1-13 THE WHITE ORYX

2009-06-30T23:38:00.001+09:00

Mandy Brown takes some photos of the onyx. She is writing a book about the animals of Arabia. Today she is into the desert eighth Abdullah. He is an onyx ranger. On the way, they find dead mother onyx. There are poachers in the desert too. Poachers usually shoot the onyx. They sell the heads. And sometimes they catch the young onyx and sell them. There isn't young onyx near the dead mother onyx. Poachers have got her baby. Mandy, Abdullah and police pursue the poachers. They get tow poachers and young onyx. Young onyx isn't dead.

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Pinhil

2009-06-25T23:24:00.000+09:00

Yesterday was drunk with the people the part-time job ahead in the town at 1 PM. Because I was a car, the soft drink was drunk. Because all had gathered after having closed the shop, starting was late. The shop where I am working is a restaurant. It is a shop of Korean food. The name is called pineapple Hill. I am doing the kitchen there. The master chef there is a person like father for me. It is very easy though is scary when angry usually. It ate about two hours all and it drank. And, it talked a lot. It was very happy.

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BR1-12 TINKERS ISLAND

2009-06-23T23:18:00.003+09:00

London, November 1798 Jenny Tinker is fourteen. She and her father, Sam, work in Covent Garden market. The Tinkers get up early every morning and work very hard. One day, Sam was mistaken for the thief and he was arrested. They caught napping and run away. They found Island. The island is big and has a lot of tall, thick trees. Next day, they start to make a small house with grass and wood. They work very hard. After four days they finish. This is "Tinker's Island". One morning, Jenny sees something. It is a ship and it is coming to the island. Twenty minutes later the three men are on Tinkers Island. They were found. They are good English men. That evening, one of the men says to Tinkers, "Our ship, the red rose, is going to America. Come with us. You can start a new life there." The next day January 1st, 1800. Sam and Jenny are on the ship. They start going to the new world.

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Essay 5 Worst day in my life

2009-06-22T18:26:00.004+09:00

The worst day in my life was to have encountered the accident. It encountered the car accident in May two years ago. I would drive to my friends. But when I was waiting by the signal waiting, it was thrown from the back. I have not understood what happened in surprise.

The day was very awful rain and was very bad view. I descended the car panicking. And, whether my car became it anyhow was confirmed. As for my car, the part of the light in the back was broken. Then, I went to the place with other car. The owner of the car was about sixty year’s old uncle. The uncle was very gentle. Because I had stopped the car, the uncle said me ‘I'm sorry. The uncle was bad.’ And his business card was passed to me by the uncle. I have not understood why it to be good because I had myself in the accident for the first time. I get the license of the car and have already become year third. However, it was the first time for me to experience like this.

I like to drive still very much. I felt that it was scared to drive for several days from this day. This day was the worst day for me. It was very scary for me. But I drive to every day. I want to take care not happening of such an accident. When the weather is bad and hurrying up, it is necessary to drive taking care enough. I cannot forget very worst day.

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Night Hiking

2009-06-21T23:50:00.001+09:00

I went to Amakusa yesterday because there is activity of walking club. We went to Amakusa by bus in the evening. It gathered in the school in the beginning. And, it left at seven o'clock. We walked on the road of agar-agar in the middle of the night. And, it arrived at the beach at 12 o'clock of the middle of the night. And, we changed into a bathing suit. We played all on the beach. There were a lot of fireflies in the sea. It was very beautiful and I was moving. Then, we played for about two hours. And, it began to walk again at two o'clock. It took a rest on the way. It returned to the school by bus because the bus had come at four o'clock. Because everyone was tired, it was asleep in the bus. It arrived at the school at 5:30. Afterwards, I visited a hot-spring resort thoroughly with my friend. Because we were very tired, it was asleep in the hot spring. It was very happy though became tired.

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Happy Birthday!

2009-06-19T08:44:00.003+09:00

It is my father's birthday today. Father turns 50 years old. I will buy birthday cake in the way back today therefore. Moreover, I will buy the present for father. I want to celebrate father's birthday in the family today. I am glad to eat the cake today.

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Sanpo club

2009-06-16T23:12:00.003+09:00

A right photograph is my friend of the club in the photograph June 8. The member of the club drank today at 10 PM. The spear planner is Yasu. He is my friend. He is belong to the Sanpo club too. There were about 30 people. Everyone drank and danced sake there. It was very fun. I spend enjoy with a lot of my friends.

A left photograph is a photograph June 15.

They are friends of the club. It went for everyone to eat meal on this day. We went to eat Chinese. I went there for the first time. The dish was very delicious. After having eaten meal, everyone took the photograph. It was very interesting day.

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Kikuchi

2009-06-14T23:47:00.000+09:00

I went to the Kikuchi valley with my friend. It was very cool and water is very beautiful there. Because water was very cold, it was cool though it was very hot on the day. It was very interesting today. I want to go with my friend again there.

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BR1-11 The Sun and the Wind

2009-06-14T18:28:00.001+09:00

Once upon a time, there are the Sun and the Wind. They are very good friend. One day, the sun said “I’m strong,” and the wind said “I’m stronger”. They started the contest of strength. This game’s winner is the Sun. This is lively retelling of the classic Aesop’s fable.

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BR1-10 The Blue Cat Club

2009-06-12T23:13:00.003+09:00

I read "The Blue Cat Club". Main characters are James, Chantal and Merlin.One night, James and Chantal go to Blue Cat Club in Cannes. There are music and cabaret. They are drinking tomato juice, suddenly the music stops and cabaret starts. Guests see Marlin's Man of Magic. Chantal loves magic but James doesn't like Marlin's magic. He is jealous to marlin. So James plays trick to Marlin. It is very interesting but I don't want to associate with man which like James.

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Essay4 The most memorable day in your life

2009-06-11T10:44:00.001+09:00

The most memorable day in my life is a school festival two years ago. Because it very interesting. It was doing in November every year. This is quite a new experience for me, so I still can recall those days. The festival moved me deeply.

I belong to walking club. It name is Sanpo. There are about fifty people in the club now. The activity of this club is to walk. We walk to the park near the school. We walk in Ezuko and Amakusa three times a year. We sometimes drive and drink. It's very interesting because I can get a lot of friends

We started prepare for the school festival from two month ago. We prepared after school every day. For example, we sew a lot of dress for all of us. And we made a portable shrine, articles of display. We had work about four or five hours every day. We must be in time for a school festival. So we held out for the make do with to a cultural festival every day. I made a stained glass window in a church then. This work made me tire. But I was happy when I finished make it.

A school festival started since in November 1. The first day of school festival was very fine weather. We had enjoyed school festival. There were a lot of people other than the students of this university in school festival. There were young and old, men and women there. I had enjoyed it. It’s very interesting.

The final day is most memorable, because our club got a prize in final day. We were moved to tears. So I have remembered the final day of a school festival yet. I was not able to be forgotten a school festival of two years ago.

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BR1-09 The Gingerbread Man

2009-06-10T22:38:00.004+09:00

Once upon a time, a little old woman and a little old man lived on a farm. Most of the time, they were very happy. But one thing made them sad. They had no children, so the little old woman decided to make a boy out of gingerbread. They smell hot gingerbread, so little woman opened the oven door and looked in, but gingerbread man jumped out and run away. He runs away very fast. He was singing. “Run, run, as fast as you can, You can’t catch me, I’m the gingerbread man!!!” Nobody couldn’t catch him. He run away from a little old woman, a little old man, a horse, a cow, a farmer and some children. He run away fast, but after all, he was cheated by a fox. Fox was very wily. The gingerbread man was eaten by a fox. It is a sad story.

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Happy Birthday!

2009-06-07T03:48:00.005+09:00

Happy Birthday to Yousuke! He is my friend. I know him when I was a kindergarten. He works in Kitakyusyu now. He works at TOYOTA from two years ago. He is very kind. Today is him birthday. He is twenty one years old.

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BR1-08 Princess Polly and the Pony

2009-06-05T11:19:00.002+09:00

There is a cheerful girl. She is a princess. She likes riding pony and mud, but her parents dislikes. “Princess must not gallop” said the King. Princess Polly said “Being a princess is boring, so I can’t do ANYTHING”. One day, she discovered the poster. This poster is Pony Games news. The King said “Your mother and I are giving the first prize. Of course, you can’t enter”. But Princess Polly wants to join this game. The day of game, she put on her costume and crept outside. Polly climbed onto Pickle, the smallest pony and they galloped away together to Strawberry Hill. Pickle’s hooves pounded over ground. Polly and Pickle flew over the finishing line. They were the winners!!! The Queen said “Off with your hat and cloak. Everyone wants to see the winner”. The crowd gasped. “It’s the Princess,” they cried. Princess Polly looked at her parents and said “I did win!!! Will you give me a wish?” the King and Queen consented unwillingly. Polly said “For one day each week, I’d like not to be a princess. I want to get muddy and ride ponies and race. Today is my first non-princess day!!!” She galloped all the way home.

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clean

2009-06-05T00:17:00.000+09:00

This picture is walking club. We had cleaning every lunch time.

A bowling meet

2009-05-30T23:48:00.001+09:00

I took part in activity of a walking club. Today is a bowling meet of my club. It's opposition to many groups. There are eight groups. A first, I got a 115 score, second I got a 132 score. My groups won the bowling meet.

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Waling culb

2009-05-27T22:55:00.012+09:00

This picture is my friends who are walking club's member. Today is walking club activity. There are nine people in my group of walking club. There are Yuki Micky Takako and Reicyeru. We went to diamond city. It's a shopping center. There is shopping center in a Kashima city. It's very big store. We ate to a hamberger steak in there. And we went to a game center in shopping center. We played a game. Michitaka is good at UFO catcher. He got a teddy bear. Then, we played bowling. He is a good bowler who bowled a 200 game. I bowled a 100 game. We had play bowling three times. It's very interesting.

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Movie

2009-05-22T12:08:00.001+09:00

This movie is much moved. It is marital story that bride of month of one of remainder of one's life. A film director is Hiroki Ryuichi. A heroine is Nagashima Chie who is ordinary a girl. She is decided to marry to boyfriend, but she had one’s illness case to breast cancer. This story is real story.

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Drinking

2009-05-18T23:42:00.004+09:00

This picture is my friends of walking club. Today is a welcome party for new students. We drank in the Matuya.

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Beer

2009-05-17T22:13:00.006+09:00

This beer is premium malt's. It's very good!

I went to a factory which is making to a beer with my walking club. There is the factory in the Kashima town. The factory is Santry. Its admission free and we could to inspect the free of charge. I went to a factory which is making to a beer with my walking club. There is the factory in the Kashima town. The factory is Santry. Its admission free and we could to inspect the free of charge. A Santry is large factory. There is a lot of a tank. They made a beer with barley and a hop plant.

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BBQ･･･

2009-05-17T09:03:00.004+09:00

Good morning! This is the rain today. (; д ;) I'm going to do a BBQ with my friends of club. But today is rain. So today's BBQ has been canceled. If it not rains, we are going to go to the Kikuchi keikoku. Too bad.

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BR1-07 Dino's Day in London

2009-05-17T00:23:00.000+09:00

Tommy Grant is taxi driver. His boss is Sam. A wealthy actress wants her son, Dino, to have a cultural tour of London by taxi. Tommy goes to meet Dino fifteen minutes early. Dino is very willful boy. Tommy got a lot of compensation by Dino's mother, but Dino use all money. In the afternoon, they went back. there is Dino's mother, and she is very angry. Dino is another boy!!! Tommy was mistaking Dino for another boy. Who is the boy? He is Sam' s son. He is very cunning boy!!!

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“The Pursuit of Happyness”

2009-05-13T23:34:00.001+09:00

I watched the movie “The Pursuit of Happyness” with my friend in school library. I often watch adventure and action movies, but this day we watched family love movie.Will Smith plays the main character Chris Gardner. The film begins in 1981 in San Francisco, California. Linda and Chris Gardner live in a small apartment with their son, Christopher. Chris has invested the family's life savings in a franchise selling portable bone density scanners. These scanners provide slightly denser pictures than X-rays, but most of the doctors Chris visits find that they are too high-priced. Linda works in a dead-end job in a local hotel laundry. The tension between them mounts as unpaid rent and bills continue to accumulate. Chris often parks his car in disallowed areas so he can make scheduled appointments on time, and after parking tickets remains unpaid, their car is impounded. After missing a shift at her job, Linda finally leaves without their son Christopher, returns briefly, and then departs for New York City, where a better job awaits her, leaving behind the boy at his father's request.Chris accepts an unpaid internship at a brokerage firm Dean Witter Reynolds that promises employment to only one trainee at its conclusion. His lack of salary, and his lack of scanners to try and sell, leaves him riddled with debt, and he and his son eventually become homeless. After spending several nights riding buses and sleeping in subway restrooms, saddled with their meager belongings, they begin lining up at the Glide Memorial Church on a daily basis in an effort to secure accommodations for the night. Sometimes they succeed, other times they literally are left out in the cold. As he struggles to provide a semblance of a family life for his son under the direst of circumstances, Chris becomes more determined to complete the intern program and become the sole trainee the firm will hire.In the end, Chris gets the job and later starts his own brokerage firm in 1987. Then in 2006 he sells a minority of it for a multi-million dollar deal.I thought it is good to watching movies besides the action movies. I like Will Smith because he is a very interesting fellow and his acting is very good. I want to watch another movie.

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BR1-06 Clever Rabbit and the Lion

2009-05-10T00:22:00.000+09:00

Once upon a time, in a great big jungle lived a great big lion and animals. The lion had great big paws and very sharp claws. He said “I’m king of the jungle and I’m going to eat you all up”. The jungle animals cried “NO!!!”. There is a very clever rabbit. She has a good plan. Clever rabbit led lion to the deep, wide river. She cheated the lion and dropped to the river. He let out one last ROAR!!!.... and was never seen again.

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Ezuko

2009-05-09T23:36:00.007+09:00

It's very hot today. This picture is playing basketball in the Ezuko Park. I went to the park with my walking club. There were about thirty people then. We walked to the Ezuko from KGU. We gathered in a student’s dining hall of KGU at nine o’clock. We had started walking to the park then. We walked about forty minutes. At last we arrived in the park. We were playing basketball, volleyball, and tag. It’s very interesting.

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BR1-05 The Fox and the Crow

2009-05-08T00:20:00.008+09:00

There is a fox in the forest. He is always hungry. One day, he saw crow with some cheese on the tree. He wants crow’s cheese. He is very wily so he grins at crow. He says to crow “You’re very pretty!!!” Crow notice the fox. Fox says “What beautiful feathers!” and crow spreads her feather. Fox asks “Can you sing too?” and crow nods. Crow opens her beak and singing. She falls down her cheese and fox snaps it up. Crow cries and say “That is mine!!!” but fox only laugh. Fox says “Don’t always believe people who say nice things”. I don’t want to have friends like the fox.

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May 5

2009-05-06T09:18:00.003+09:00

This picture is a shaved ice. It's mango shaved ice. It's the cold, but very good.

BR1-4 The Little Giraffe

2009-05-04T00:17:00.000+09:00

There was a little giraffe. He was the first giraffe in the world. He lived in East Africa with his best friend, Rhino. Rhino is a very mild-mannered rhinoceros. Every day, they looked for food, but the sun was very hot and the earth was dry so there was no food anywhere. They were very hungry. One day, they went to see the wise man and said “we’re very hungry so please can you help?”. The wise man said “Come back tomorrow and I’ll make a magic drink for you”. The next day, the little giraffe visited the wise man but the Rhino didn’t come. The little giraffe began to magic drink and he grew taller and taller. His neck was very taller. Rhino forgot about magic drink!!! He was struck with dry grass. He was angry with the giraffe, the wise man and himself. He’s still angry today so Rhinoceros has a hot temper.

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BR1-03 How Elephants lost their wings

2009-05-02T23:59:00.000+09:00

Once upon a time, elephants could fly. They flew everywhere. They flew high into the sky and down to the ground. They are cute but they are very noisy. They yelled and crowed roosters so trees and houses shock below them. They flew into trees and smashed them. They landed on houses and fell right through. Soon all the trees were broken and there were no houses left. “We must stop them” said gods and they thought of a trick. They invited the elephants to a grand feast. The elephants ate and ate. When their tummies were full, they slept. The gods took away their wings. They gave them to the peacocks and the banana trees. The elephants were very cross. They shouted and they stomped but they didn’t get their wings back and they never flew again.

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Essay 3 Favorite animals

2009-05-01T11:40:00.013+09:00

My favorite animal is dogs because it’s very cute. I like a small dogs best. For example, Miniature Pinscher, Chihuahua, and Bulldog.

I like miniature pinscher in a dog most, because the dog is very small, and it is pretty. A miniature pinscher is born in Germany. A miniature pinscher has big eyes, and a slim body is very pretty. A miniature pinscher has an active character. In addition, it is calm and composed, and its wariness is strong. It’s shorter than other dogs. A miniature pinscher is a dog species with a history that is older than a Doberman pinscher. When the miniature pinscher splash the terrier of the short hair and Dachshund and an Italian courser on each other, and it was made, it is said.

I found this miniature pinscher in a pet shop when I went to Nagasaki for spring vacation. It stared at with these big eyes and I came to like it then. The dog which I watched at the time barked cheerfully. And it looked towards me. The face of the dog was very cute, so I couldn't forget the dog then.

The animals made us happy and heal. I think that we spend with the animals in our life. There are two things that I want to do if I keep a dog. The first, I want to keep a dog in my house. Therefore I want to keep this a dog. The dog makes us a gentle feeling and heals it again. The second, I want to keep a miniature pinscher in the future. And I walk to take a together with it.

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May 1

2009-05-01T10:57:00.003+09:00

Today is May 1. There are the main events of May is

BR1-02: The Wish fish

2009-04-29T23:43:00.009+09:00

There are Bob and Bet. They live by the sea and them like fish very much. They aren’t rich, but they live together happiness. Bob fishes all day. He catches big fish and small fish but one day, he catches a magic fish!!! This fish is rainbow-colored and very beautiful. The fish gives Bob and Bet three wishes. Bob says “I wish to rich”. Bet says “I wish to be richer”. The last wish, Bet says “I wish to be richer still!!!” The fish gets angry and cries “Too greedy!!!” The fish leaves to the sea.

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Essay 2 My treasure

2009-04-24T10:40:00.021+09:00

There are three treasures of me. It’s very interested for me. So I can’t life without it.

First, my treasure is my family. There are six people my family. My family is father, mother, older brother, grandfather, grandmother. My father’s name is Takayoshi. He is fifty years old this year. He works butcher. He always got up at five, and he went to work at six everyday. So He not stays in home when I got up every morning. He is very noisy, so I sometimes get angry to him. He usually wasn’t angry. My mother’s name is Mayumi. She is fifty years old this year too. She is a reliable person. She likes shopping. She works butcher too. She usually not gets angry. So my mother is scary when she sometimes gets angry.

Second, my treasure is my friends. I need to be my friends. My friends help when I worry. And I would be happy to enjoy myself together. I like to speak with my friends at school every day. I like speaking of love at school with my friends. It's very interesting.

Finally, my treasure is a club. I belong to a walking club. It name is SANPO. Club activity of a walking club walks Ezuko and Amakusa three times a year. We sometimes drive and drink. There is a walking club more than 100 people now.
Those are very important for me. I belong to SANPO club and HOSPI club, too. There are about sixty people in HOSPI. We sometimes study about manner, SPI, English ward and so on.

(263 words)

WATCHMEN!!!

2009-04-23T11:39:00.000+09:00

I watched the movie with my friend today. We watched the ' WATCHMEN'. It's an action movie that is very interesting. The movie made us excited. There are six people to keep the peace of the world.

BR1-01: Cinderella

2009-04-17T11:22:00.019+09:00

I read this book. I had read this book when I was child. I like this story, because this story is happy end and I had often read from child. A main character is a girl called Cinderella. She is very kind. She lived with a stepmother and two daughters. But they were very mean.They always told her that make a dish and to clean. She wasn't always complaining and exerting her self.One day, a letter comes to the house from a castle. It's a invitation of dance party in a castle. They were very glad. And they prepared to go to dance party. They put on a beautiful dress. Then, they had gone to the castle by a horse drawn carriage. She couldn't go to the dance party. Because there were a lot of things that she should be to do and she has not a beautiful dress. She has to clean of the house.Then, a elderly woman appeared from the inside of a fireplace. She is a witch who changed her soiled clothes to a beautiful dress.A pumpkin was changed to a carriage, and a little bards and a squirrel were changed to a pilot. Finally, the witch sad that ' you have to go back home by twelve o'clock midnight.' She has go to the castle quickly.

(224wordas)

My friends

2009-04-10T12:03:00.009+09:00

This picture is my friends. My friends are Tomomi and Ryoko. Tomomi is the leftmost who is very cheerful. She is same Junner high school to me. She is study the science of nursing in Kagoshima. Ryoko is the light most who is kind. She is study in Kagoshima too. They want to become nurse, so they studies very hard everyday. But they go back home at spring vacation.

(69words)

Essay 1 Self-introduction

2009-04-10T11:28:00.014+09:00

Writing Placement Essay for Writing 3 (2009)

Hi, my name is Yoshie H. I’m twenty years old. I’m from Kumamoto. I go to KGU now. I’m studying English there. I like English, but I'm not good at grammar. So I should study English more.

My hobby is driving and shopping. I go to school by car every day. I often go driving with my friends on holiday. I like to drive very much. So I always become the driver when I drive with my friends. And I like to shop. I have often been shopping with my friends. I want to drive and shop with my host family. And I want to walk in the home stay ahead.

I talk about my club activities. I belong to the walking club. It is named Sanpo. This club has fifty members. The activity of this club is to walk. We walk to the park near the school. And we climb a mountain. We have often gone to play and drink. It's very　interesting. I can get a lot of friends. Do you like walking? If you like it, let’s walk together.

By the way, do you like Japanese food? What kind of food do you like? I want to hear what you like. Do you like Sushi and Natto? Can you eat Natto? I like Natto. But the smell is strong. So there are a lot of people who cannot eat it. Japanese food has a lot of very delicious things. I like to eat, so I want to enjoy meals with my host family.

I want to study English hard, and to make a lot of friends. And, I want to spend every day with you. Thank you for hearing my talk.

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A HAPPY NEW YEAR

2009-01-03T00:30:00.002+09:00

A Happy New Year.
This year is 2009. It was very early last year. I'd like to exert myself strenuously this year.

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PORTFOLIO FOR WRITING IV

2008-12-17T10:43:00.006+09:00

Portfolio for Writing IV,
Section 1a OR 1c

[Please delete the unsuitable class section and "OR" (above), along with this line of remarks.]

(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)

[Please embed your proto-portfolios here; then remove this line of remarks, including the square brackets.]

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below.)

Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).

1.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates yy.mm.dd	¶	W	C	L	P	M
Website review 08.09.29 (375+ words)
Favorite place(-s) 08.10.20 (450+ words)
Mrs. Doubtfire 08.11.04 (500+ words)
Community life 08.11.17 (default length*)
Kumamoto's best-kept secrets 08.12.01 (5+ ¶¶)		08.12.03		131			3
Learning with computers 2008.12.15 (6+ ¶¶)


Totals	---	---

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
*: "long enough to cover the ... [communities] you choose," Writing Studio Blog, Preparation for Next Essays, 2008.10.29)

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets, then identify your best essay, and write out your reasons for selecting it here.]

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments yy.mm.dd	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts yy.mm.dd	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then write out your reflections on both giving and receiving comments here.]
....

3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	07.05.16	39	1
2-01	Flood!	08.12.07
2-02	The Rainbow Machine	08.12.07
2-03
2-04
2-05
2-06
2-07
2-08
2-09
2-10
2-11
2-12
2-13
2-14
2-15
2-16
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Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?	√
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	√
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?		√
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?		√
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	√
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	√
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")	√
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)	√
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)		√
"movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)		√
"brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")	√
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	√
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? ___ other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. www (n) xxx (m) yyy (o) zzz (p) ...	---	---
4.3. Links & media	---	---
4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics?
Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?	√
How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics? ___ posts including photos or other graphics	---	---
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?		√
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links? ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?		√
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? ___ posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here: ... ... ...	---	---
What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yy.mm.dd) for reference. ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date)	---	---

4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing on it

Please feel free to include reflections on both spring and fall semester work, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).

6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors

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Notes:

This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c (Fall, 2008).
Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).

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Essay Learning with Computers

2008-12-10T11:23:00.007+09:00

I think that computer is very important. Because it very convenience, and helpful. So we are need it. We can't to life nothing them.
There are a lot of functions it. For example, we can be able to anything it. There are mail, internet and shopping. Mail is very interesting, because we can letters for other people by computers. We can be able to get the latest news and a lot of things by internet. Shopping is very convenience. For example, I can't shopping when I was very busy. But I can be able to buy anything by computers.

Braintorming-Learing with computers

2008-12-10T10:43:00.004+09:00

Learning with Computers(2008.12.10)

Communication
- People
- Tools
- Computer applications: Mail
- Web applications: Blogs,Chat,Gmail,Email
- Blogging
- Mail: Gmail, Email
- Chat

Information
- Internet: Sesrching

Connecting
- Connections
- Connectivity

Convenience
- Dictionaries
- Movies
- Pictures
- Shopping
- Translation
- Typing:speed

Knowledge
- Educstion
- Games
- Information
- Internet: Searching

Other stuff(alphabetical)
-ful
- Helpful
- Useful

Free-writing Learing with Computer

Introduction
Communication
Knowledge
Qualities
Convenience
Helpful
Usefulness
Other

BR02-02 The Rainbow Machine

2008-12-07T21:33:00.008+09:00

I read this book. This book is a story that children make the rainbow. We can't only the see a rainbow after rain. So when I could saw it, I become very happy. A rainbow made us happy.
One day, the children looked up and saw a rainbow across the sky. In a place for away, there was a lorry. It was a very big lorry because on the back was a very big machine. The machine made rainbows and was called The Rainbow Machine. There are seven colors in the rainbow. It took seven people to look after the rainbow machine. They cleaned it and polished it and they made sure it worked properly. When there was a rainbow, everyone stopped to look at it. Children got on the track without permission when seven people were in the restaurant. And, the machine in the track did work. Then, a big rainbow was able to be done with the track. But, the machine has broken. The sky gradually changed from blue into red. Men put a machine in order in a hurry. Then, the sky returned to blue. I like rainbows made the blue sky. It is very beautiful.

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BR02-01 Flood!

2008-12-07T21:31:00.005+09:00

I read the book named "Flood". This book is very interesting!
It had been raining for days. There is no sign in which raining for a long time and continuing stop. A girl named Biff. She and her mother took a dog out for a walk in the outside. Of course, the outside is a heavy rain. She and her mother walked across the park. They wanted to cross the little bridge, but the stream had flooded. She began to wade cross the bridge, but her mother called her back. The next morning, when Biff and Chip were at school, it was still raining. The children couldn't go out to play. In the afternoon it stopped raining. That evening Biff, Chip and Kipper were watching TV. The weather forecast came on. Some bad storms were coming, with a lot of more rain. The storm came in the middle of the night. It was so loud that Biff and Chip couldn't sleep. Theirs mother brought them a hot drink. Next day, Theirs father took a dog for a walk. Chip went with him. When they got to the park, Chip gasped. The park wasflooded. It was like a giant lake. Chip thought the floods were fun. His father looked worried. It didn't stop raining, and the floods grew worse. The water reached the edge of the park. The children watched the cars going through the flood. One car had broken down and was stuck in the middle. That day, the school was closed. It rained in the night. Father couldn't sleep. And everyone woke up. The lights didn't work, so mother lit a lamp. They all looked downstairs. The hall was full of water. They will take shelter on the next morning. Then, a cat was stuck on a fence. The fire officer stopped the dinghy. They went to a hall in the town. A lot of people were there. When the floods were over they went back home. They gasped when they saw the house. They put the room in order all.
I thought that it was serious to put a room dirty due to the flood in order reading this book. So I like that sun is better than rain.

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Free-writing Kumamoto

2008-12-03T10:26:00.010+09:00

I thought that unpopular is a summer festival in a Ueki town. This festival is call "Ueki' hattensai". Hattensai is summer festival once a year at Ueki town. There is a festival once a year at Ueki town office. This festival is opened every year. The many people visit there. There are many children and an old person. And there are many street vendor stalls. For example, candy floss, yakisoba, and apple candy. There is lottery. A lottery is very popular to children.

There is Ueki town office when I was child.

And there are a lot of food wagon an open space in there. The elementary

schoolchildren make a portable shrine. The portable shrine made an empty can by children. The children march with a portable shrine on one's carry.

5000 fireworks are launched one after another in the fancy pyrotechnics and the night sky, and it becomes the mood of summer with a lively quiet hot spring street at a dash in the river. It's very beautiful.

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Desember 2 A sunny place

2008-12-02T12:04:00.004+09:00

Now, I 'm basking in the sun with Nastuki. It's very good! And colored leaves are very beautiful. We are sitting on a bench in a back gate of KGU. The view from here is truly beautiful. The sun made us warm. With the sun shining in, the bodies gradually become warmer. A ginkgo is become yellow. And a maple is become deep red.

64words

2008-11-29T22:58:00.001+09:00

Essay Map: Composition Tool for Short Essays

2008-11-26T12:08:00.003+09:00

Hattensai is summer festival of Ueki. There is a festival once a year at Ueki town office. This festival is opened every year. The many people visit there. There are many children and an old person. And there are a lot of street vendor's stall. For example, candy floss, yakisoba, and apple candy. There is lottery. A lottery is very popular to children.

Ueki town office

a food wagon

a portable shrine
An elementary schoolchildren make a portable shrine.
A portable shrine made an empty can by children.
The children march with a portable shrine on one's carry.

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Free-writing Kumamoto

2008-11-26T11:17:00.007+09:00

Hattensai is summer festival of Ueki. There is a festival once a year at Ueki town office. This festival is opened every year. The many people visit there. There are many children and an old person. And there are a lot of street vendor’s stalls. For example, candy floss, yakisoba, and apple candy. There is lottery. A lottery is very popular to children. Ueki town offices food wagon a portable shrine An elementary schoolchildren make a portable shrine. A portable shrine made an empty can by children. The children march with a portable shrine on one's carry.

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Brainstorming secret Kumamoto

2008-11-26T10:50:00.003+09:00

Hattensai
summer festival
Ueki
a town office
an open space
develop
food
a street vendor's stall
fireworks
children
stage
a portable shring
art
lottery

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November 22 In Miyazaki

2008-11-25T22:24:00.005+09:00

I went to in Miyazaki with my friends. I went to there with Yasu, Daichan, Mayumi. When I was sleeping, I got my cell phone about two hours night from Yasu. He is walking club’s member. He has often called me at midnight. He sad me "We will start as soon as we are ready!" So I had go to meet at him house. Then we leave for Miyazaki by car. He was drove still arrive in Miyazaki, and I was sitting the seat next to the driver. We arrived our destination before dawn. We wait for the light of day. Just then, the sky is brightening on the sea. This picture is Okuragahama of Miyazaki. We didn't sleep because this sunrise moved us deeply and it's very cold there. It's very beautiful! I thought the beach and sea of Miyazaki is very beautiful. Maybe, Miyazaki's sea is more beautiful than Kumamoto's sea.

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Free-write Community life

2008-11-05T11:44:00.004+09:00

Free-writing01 Family

2008-10-29T11:15:00.006+09:00

I think family is very important. Because we need life with my family. There are six people in my family. My family is father, mother, older brother, grandfather, grandmother, and me. My father is very funny. He is very kind. So I like him. But he sometime noisy. My mother is very gentle.

2008-10-29T11:12:00.004+09:00

family children
friendship
love
bonds/bonding
employment
divorce
marriage
(dis-)honesty
housekeeping
actors/acting
humour
lifestyle
philosophy of life

October 19 Today is Reona's birthday!!!

2008-10-19T22:52:00.003+09:00

Happy birthday to Reona!!! She is twenty years old.

October 18 Shopping in Fukuoka

2008-10-19T22:48:00.004+09:00

I went to Fukuoka with my friend today. She is a friend of our part-time job. Her name is Hikaru. She was twety three years old. We were shopping in marinoa.

October 10 Study

2008-10-10T17:59:00.001+09:00

I 'm studying English now with my friends. But we talking all the time. We a consultation about walking culb. There is KGU fastival in November 1, 2, 3. So we talk to about it. After talking, we can a lot of doing for the fastival.

Favorite places: Brainstorm 02

2008-10-08T11:26:00.004+09:00

Quiet

Lake
Trees
Flowers
Lawn
Sky
Playground equipment
Birds
Stars
Green
Blue
Cars
Children
Family
Dogs
A cherry
Worter
Fishes

My favorite place

2008-10-08T11:03:00.002+09:00

My favorite place is a Hakemiya park. Because It's very beautful place there. We can see a lot of a cherry when be spring. For example, And there is a lake. So we can play in the lake at summer. We will be able to see a lot of fallen leaves. There is Hakemiya park near my house. I often go to the there with my friend, when I was high school student.

Favorite fall activity

2008-10-08T10:46:00.002+09:00

My favorite fall activity is eating the foods of fall. I like eating very much. There are a lot of good foods in fall. For example, there are a chestnut, edible wild plants and a pacific saury in fall. There are a lot of delicias food. So my favorite fall activity is eating.

September 21 Happy Birthday

2008-09-21T23:42:00.002+09:00

Today is my friend 's birthday. Her name is Chisa. She is my friend when we were high school students. She is training of the university and exists in the United States now. She stays there during half a year. Next, it is next year to meet. I am very a friend with her. However, meeting after we become university students has decreased. The goodness of relations doesn't change even if our meeting decreases. We are reporting with the cellular phone mutually though she is in the United States. I want to play together when she comes back this time. I trust her very much. I think it is painful in the friend with a good relations the possession in the future.

September 19 HUIS TEN BOSCH

2008-09-19T15:59:00.004+09:00

I went to Nagasaki with my friend in the morning today. I drove the car. It was said that the typhoon was coming today. But, it cleared up and was very hot in the weather. We arrived at Sasebo in Nagasaki in daytime. We went to HUIS TEN BOSCH in Sasebo. HUIS TEN BOSCH had the school child and the tourist. We turned walking in HUIS TEN BOSCH. And, it ate a hamburger at a restaurant. We went to the hotel named Europe that existed in HUIS TEN BOSCH. For me, I was the first time to stay at the hotel in HUIS TEN BOSCH. So I was very interesting. We stayed room number was the 327th. We put luggage on the room and went to the outside again. I have been to HUIS TEN BOSCH in the family when I am a child. But, We went to HUIS TEN BOSCH for the first time after it had grown up this time. Child's time was different feelings. After we had walked in HUIS TEN BOSCH, the spa was done. I did not know anything. My friend secretly reserved the spa and it existed. I was very glad of present of friend's surprise. I experienced the spa for the first time in the life. I was able to be relaxed very much. After the spa had ended, it took supper. Supper was roasting on a hot plate. It was very delicious. We went back into one's room and we watched television about the supper. And, we went to the bar at the hotel and sake was drunk. We strolled on the outside. The wind was very pleasant. I was very happy today.

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August 20

2008-08-20T22:30:00.001+09:00

August 1

2008-08-01T15:11:00.001+09:00

July 13 19 years old

2008-07-13T15:04:00.002+09:00

Today is July 13. Today was the last day of 19 years old. I spend it sleeping for a long time at my home today. I felt the time slowly. I become 20 years old tomorrow. I have glad to grow up. Moreover, sake can be drunk. However, growing up is a little complex. When I become 20 years old, I want to become independent. It is necessary to take the responsibility by what when growing up. Therefore, I want to become independent early and to become splendid.

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July 12 Birthday Party!!!

2008-07-12T21:12:00.000+09:00

Movie 'Gedo arecord of a war'

2008-07-11T23:46:00.004+09:00

There was a television of Ghibli tonight. This movie was open to the public last year. The name of the movie is said, "Ged record of a war". I saw it for the first time. It was very interesting. The girl named Teru was very lovely. She thought that the mind was a strong girl very much.

July 10 Test!!!

2008-07-10T23:20:00.000+09:00

There were test today. So, I went to the school in the morning, and I had study hard in the library. I had very tired. The test made me tird. So I want to sleep to the bed naw. But There are test tomorrow, too. I have to study hard from naw. I hope to finish the test to early.

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Movie ' Adventures of Huckleberry Finn '

2008-07-10T02:28:00.008+09:00

I saw the movie of The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn. The movie is boy's story. It grows up to the adult though the boy travels. A boy name is Huck. And a man name is Jim. This movie's story was about slave trade, and the discrimination against blacks. When old was American's slave, the talk was a black. This movie moved me. All men must be equal. This movie is made for the racial discrimination and the slave. However, there are a lot of difficulties during travel. Huck helped Jim. And, Jim keeps also believing Huck and it traveling together. Their strong friendship is very wonderful. This movie was very good. Therefore, please look.

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Self introduction

2008-07-09T10:57:00.003+09:00

July 8 Hot!!!

2008-07-08T13:04:00.002+09:00

Today was very hot! But I like summer, because there are a lot of summer festivals. So I 'm looking forward to be summer vacation. I want to summer vacation. And I want to go to sea. I want to finish for many tests.

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July 7

2008-07-07T22:48:00.001+09:00

July 6

2008-07-06T13:16:00.001+09:00

2008-07-06T11:52:00.000+09:00

July 5

2008-07-05T23:48:00.001+09:00

July 4 My friend v(>u<)v

2008-07-04T23:37:00.004+09:00

I went to the beauty parlor today. Then I met my friend of local. Her name is Akina. She is a college student. To become a dietitian, she is studying hard. I ate dinner in joyfful with her. We talked for about two hours. We talked the junior high school age and love. She will find employment from next year. So we talked about the job hunting.

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2008-07-02T01:42:00.002+09:00

July 1 Today is July!!!

2008-07-01T00:00:00.002+09:00

Today is July. I am excited in July. Because July 14 is My birthday, and there is summer vacation. However, there are a lot of tests before summer vacation. The test makes me feel sad. I have to study the tests. I have to study a lot of things. So I hope to finish the tests.

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June 29 My holiday

2008-06-29T23:26:00.003+09:00

I had to a part-time job since the evening today. So, I was stayed in my house until the evening. I spend of watching TV at the morning. Because July comes soon, it is glad. It is because it is a birthday in July if it is possible to do. It is and because there is summer vacation. I want to go to the sea and the mountain in summer vacation. And, I want to do the BBQ with my friends. I'm looking forward to summer vacation.

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June 26 Nothing

2008-06-26T15:34:00.003+09:00

There were not a part-time job today. So after shool, I studyed English in library. I came home early today. And I ate dinner with my family. I eating with the family is happy.

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Portfolio for Writing III

2008-06-25T11:34:00.004+09:00

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Student ID: 07151
(last five digits of
your student no.)

Portfolio for Writing III,
Section 1a [or] 1c
(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

[embed your proto-portfolios here]

(See: Note 2, below.)

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below[.])

1.1. Showcase	Short titles [+ links]	Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)	¶	W	C	L	P	M
Self-introduction 08.04.20 (250 words)	Self introduction	2008.4.9	1	267	2	0	0	0
Movie review o8.05.04 (300words)	SHREK!	2008.4.30	2	219	0	0	0	0
University life 08.05.18	My university life	2008.5.30	3	219	0	0	0	0
Another review 08.06.01	TV "Last Friends"	2008.6.1	4	262	0	0	0	0
Language learning history 08.06.15	Personal Language Learning History	2008.6.11	5	455	0	0	0	0
Slideshow 2008.07.6 (five to ten slides)	Self introduction	2008.07.09	6		0	0	0	0


Totals	---	---

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media embedded

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

[Remove these square brackets, including these remarks; identify your best essay, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments (yyyy.mm.dd)	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts (yyyy.mm.dd)	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments[]
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

[Remove these square brackets, including these remarks; write out your reflections on giving and receiving comments here.]

3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	07.05.16	39	1
1-01	Mike's Lucky Day	08.04.24	127	0
1-02	Rotten Apples	08.05.31	185	0
1-03	Kipper and the Giant	08.06.02	169	0
1-04	Pocket Money	08.06.30	129	0
1-05	Mirror Island	08.07.01	70	0
1-06	Lost in the Jungle	08.07.01	201	0
1-07	Don't Be Silly	08.07.07	160	0
1-08	The Go-kart Race	08.07.07	133	0
1-09	The Bully	08.07.08	155	0
1-10	The Outing	08.07.08	106	0
1-11	The Broken Roof	08.07.09	125	0
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Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

[Remove these square brackets, including these remarks; identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
4.1. Does your blog have an archive?
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)
"movies" (plural) AND "photos" (plural)
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? ___ other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. www (n) xxx (m) yyy (o) zzz (p) ...	---	---
4.3. Links & media	---	---
4.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics?
Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?
How many of your blog posts this semester include pictures or other graphics? ___ posts including pictures or other graphics	---	---
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?* ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? ___ posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list them here: ... ... ...	---	---

4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

6.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

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Notes:

This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08).
Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios in the footer of your blog.
The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008)

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Yuki's blog is introduction

2008-06-25T11:05:00.005+09:00

★Self Introduction★

Yuki's blog is interesting and very cute. She was introducing about herself in blog. I like her blog because her blog is very cute. And there are many characters. It's very good! I want to looks like her blog.

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June 23

2008-06-23T22:13:00.002+09:00

This is "Bibinpa". My part-time job is Korean restaurant. So I can eat "Bibinpa" after part-time job. This menu is not in this restaurant. This dish is very good.

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June 19 My father

2008-06-19T13:26:00.002+09:00

It was my father's birthday today. And just one year had passed since I had started working part-time today. So it was very glad. I ate with my family because there was no part-time job today.

Dad, happy birthday!

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June 14 One month before

2008-06-14T23:28:00.005+09:00

There was course of travel business from afternoon. So I went to study manners of travel. It's very difficult for me. I have to study about travel hard.

By the way, I become my birthday exactly one month later. So I'm complicated feeling now. But I'm looking forward to become birthday.

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