I had to a part-time job since the evening today. So, I was stayed in my house until the evening. I spend of watching TV at the morning. Because July comes soon, it is glad. It is because it is a birthday in July if it is possible to do. It is and because there is summer vacation. I want to go to the sea and the mountain in summer vacation. And, I want to do the BBQ with my friends. I'm looking forward to summer vacation.
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2008年6月29日日曜日
2008年6月26日木曜日
June 26 Nothing
There were not a part-time job today. So after shool, I studyed English in library. I came home early today. And I ate dinner with my family. I eating with the family is happy.
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2008年6月25日水曜日
Portfolio for Writing III
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Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
[embed your proto-portfolios here]
(See: Note 2, below.)
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below[.])
Key:
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?
Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).
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Notes:
Student ID: 07151
(last five digits of
your student no.)
(last five digits of
your student no.)
Portfolio for Writing III,
Section 1a [or] 1c
(See: Note 1, below)
Section 1a [or] 1c
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
[embed your proto-portfolios here]
(See: Note 2, below.)
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below[.]) | 1.1. Showcase | Short titles [+ links] | Dates (yyyy.mm.dd) | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
| Self-introduction 08.04.20 (250 words) | Self introduction | 2008.4.9 | 1 | 267 | 2 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Movie review o8.05.04 (300words) | SHREK! | 2008.4.30 | 2 | 219 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| University life 08.05.18 | My university life | 2008.5.30 | 3 | 219 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Another review 08.06.01 | TV "Last Friends" | 2008.6.1 | 4 | 262 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Language learning history 08.06.15 | Personal Language Learning History | 2008.6.11 | 5 | 455 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Slideshow 2008.07.6 (five to ten slides) | Self introduction | 2008.07.09 | 6 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
| Totals | --- | --- |
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media embedded
M: number of other media embedded
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- [Remove these square brackets, including these remarks; identify your best essay, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]
2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments (yyyy.mm.dd) | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
| 2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | ||||
| 2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | ||||
| 2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | ||||
| 2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts (yyyy.mm.dd) | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments*[*] |
| 2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | ||||
| 2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | --- | |
| 2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | ||
| 2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | ||||
| 2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | --- | |
| 2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | ||
* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?- ...
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
- [Remove these square brackets, including these remarks; write out your reflections on giving and receiving comments here.]
3.0. Book Reviews
| 3.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates (yyyy.mm.dd) | Words | Comments |
| Example: | 07.05.16 | 39 | 1 | |
| 1-01 | Mike's Lucky Day | 08.04.24 | 127 | 0 |
| 1-02 | Rotten Apples | 08.05.31 | 185 | 0 |
| 1-03 | Kipper and the Giant | 08.06.02 | 169 | 0 |
| 1-04 | Pocket Money | 08.06.30 | 129 | 0 |
| 1-05 | Mirror Island | 08.07.01 | 70 | 0 |
| 1-06 | Lost in the Jungle | 08.07.01 | 201 | 0 |
| 1-07 | Don't Be Silly | 08.07.07 | 160 | 0 |
| 1-08 | The Go-kart Race | 08.07.07 | 133 | 0 |
| 1-09 | The Bully | 08.07.08 | 155 | 0 |
| 1-10 | The Outing | 08.07.08 | 106 | 0 |
| 1-11 | The Broken Roof | 08.07.09 | 125 | 0 |
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3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- [Remove these square brackets, including these remarks; identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]
4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
| Showcase | Yes | No |
| 4.1. Does your blog have an archive? | ||
| 4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | ||
| 4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | ||
| 4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | ||
| 4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | ||
| 5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
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| 4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | ||
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| 4.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
| 4.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics? | ||
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| 4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | ||
| --- | --- |
| 4.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | ||
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4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.- ...
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5.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing
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6.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors
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Notes:
- This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08).
- Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios in the footer of your blog.
- The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008)
Yuki's blog is introduction
★Self Introduction★
Yuki's blog is interesting and very cute. She was introducing about herself in blog. I like her blog because her blog is very cute. And there are many characters. It's very good! I want to looks like her blog.
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2008年6月23日月曜日
2008年6月19日木曜日
June 19 My father
It was my father's birthday today. And just one year had passed since I had started working part-time today. So it was very glad. I ate with my family because there was no part-time job today.
Dad, happy birthday!
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Dad, happy birthday!
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2008年6月14日土曜日
June 14 One month before
There was course of travel business from afternoon. So I went to study manners of travel. It's very difficult for me. I have to study about travel hard.
By the way, I become my birthday exactly one month later. So I'm complicated feeling now. But I'm looking forward to become birthday.
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By the way, I become my birthday exactly one month later. So I'm complicated feeling now. But I'm looking forward to become birthday.
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2008年6月11日水曜日
June 11 My friend is driver!
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Essay-5: Personal Language Learning History
It was from my parents that I learned a language first. The word about which my parents speak in the daily life was copied and it was learned by heart casually. You told me from my elder brother, my grandparents and relative's people as well as my parents, too.
It was when they were a kindergarten and an elementary school, that it was learned to use language appropriately by the situation. A learned word and the word I know were used before. But I knew a lot of friends and teachers to have to use a word appropriately first at the school I need. It was from my parents that I learned a language first. The word about which my parents speak in the daily life was copied and it was learned by heart casually. You told me from my elder brother, my grandparents and relative's people as well as my parents, too. It was when they were a kindergarten and an elementary school, that it was learned to use languid age appropriately by the situation. A learned word and the word I know were used before. But I knew a lot of friends and teachers to have to use a word appropriately first at the school I need. A lot of languages were learned through conversation with a friend at a kindergarten. When I entered an elementary school, a written thing as well as reading was also learned. I learned the honorific to the older person tightly at an elementary school.
English as well as Japanese were also learned at a junior high school. For example when it was English though it was an easy word in Japanese, it was difficult to remember. Japanese is because it was heard daily from small time. Even a high school learned a language of English and Japanese. And English study is being done as a family of England and America at a university.
I think I also have to study a language from here. I think you tell a language to a parent, a friend and a teacher in the daily life and I acquire naturally. I had them tell a word to a parent. And you told a friend, too. The one I had tell how to use them appropriately a word was a teacher at school. The one I had teach English which is a new word again is also a teacher. You told me a lot of words, and I learned from people around. I think it's that it's very important to inform a partner using a lot of words. So I'd like also to study more words now. I learned a word in this way. During also living now, I'd like to learn.
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It was when they were a kindergarten and an elementary school, that it was learned to use language appropriately by the situation. A learned word and the word I know were used before. But I knew a lot of friends and teachers to have to use a word appropriately first at the school I need. It was from my parents that I learned a language first. The word about which my parents speak in the daily life was copied and it was learned by heart casually. You told me from my elder brother, my grandparents and relative's people as well as my parents, too. It was when they were a kindergarten and an elementary school, that it was learned to use languid age appropriately by the situation. A learned word and the word I know were used before. But I knew a lot of friends and teachers to have to use a word appropriately first at the school I need. A lot of languages were learned through conversation with a friend at a kindergarten. When I entered an elementary school, a written thing as well as reading was also learned. I learned the honorific to the older person tightly at an elementary school.
English as well as Japanese were also learned at a junior high school. For example when it was English though it was an easy word in Japanese, it was difficult to remember. Japanese is because it was heard daily from small time. Even a high school learned a language of English and Japanese. And English study is being done as a family of England and America at a university.
I think I also have to study a language from here. I think you tell a language to a parent, a friend and a teacher in the daily life and I acquire naturally. I had them tell a word to a parent. And you told a friend, too. The one I had tell how to use them appropriately a word was a teacher at school. The one I had teach English which is a new word again is also a teacher. You told me a lot of words, and I learned from people around. I think it's that it's very important to inform a partner using a lot of words. So I'd like also to study more words now. I learned a word in this way. During also living now, I'd like to learn.
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2008年6月9日月曜日
June 9 HY
I went to a concert in HY with my friend today. Everything was nice for the song HY sings.
There are a lot of songs. Their songs moved us deeply. I like the best '366 days' of their songs.
Because the song is unrequited love and one-sided love, so It's very sad. But the words of their songs sympathized.
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2008年6月8日日曜日
June 8 Sporting and eating
I went to a gym with my friend from a morning. I exercised after a long time. And we went to all you can eat for one thousand yen from noon. I exercised, so I ate much. We ate Spaghetti and pizza. I ate stomach full. There was a part-time job from the evening. I was very busy today. I worked for five hours. It was a very full day.
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2008年6月7日土曜日
June 7 Happy Birthday!
Today is a birthday, a dear my friend. He was 20 years old. He's the member of society working at kitakyushu. Though it's the same age as me, it's very steady, and I'm an adult. I don't also meet him for 1 year. 7 days are for me, it was mailed to him at 0 o'clock exactly. He's persevering in work from a daily morning to night. I respect such him very much.
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June 6 Today was fun!
I went to have the hair done with a friend today. I had my hair done short after a long time. There were group activities from the evening. So I gathered and went to Shinko at eight o'clock night. I set off fireworks for the first time this year. It was very fun. Summer comes soon.
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2008年6月4日水曜日
June 4 My family
I ate out with the family today. I have begun to enter a university and work part-time, so I'm busy every day. My brother got a job from last year, too. We have always busy. So I rarely had a meal together by family all the members today. I was very happy. I thought I'd like the family.
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2008年6月2日月曜日
June 2 My pearents
Today is the wedding anniversary of my parents. I'll be twenty years old this year. So I also have parents together in more than already twenty years. I sometimes quarrel. But they are on good terms even now. If I get married, too, we'd like to come to be my parents. And I went to a part-time job from the evening. I didn't wind and ate the hormone set menu a master chef made after a part-time job finished. It was very good. I'm happy.
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BR1-3 Kipper and the Giant
This story is interesting. I think that kipper is very kind. And he is cute.
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June 1 Sport
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May 31 A chair of travel
I wanted to get a license for travel business, so I receive a lecture on Saturday every week. So today was a lecture at school from noon. I studied about how to take it out a fare of JR and the charge. I was speaking heard neatly, so I could understand it. I went to a part-time job from the evening. It was busy day.
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2008年6月1日日曜日
Essay-4: TV "Last Friends"
I wrote it about a TV. There is a drama I'm seeing without making draw only. Drama's name is "Last friends". A script also has comics for this drama, and is Ms. Taeko Asano. I have that from night ten o'clock of Thursday every week.
Main casts are Masami Nagasawa, Jyuri Ueno, Eita, Asami Mizukawa and Nishikido Ryo. This story caught the various problems that the man of today of DV becoming social problem at present holds from front. The young who were timid in love later seem to be themselves and are the youth human story which drew the form that I'm living positively realistically. The young who had deep worries will find warmth and live in a share house so that they would like to die. They're friendship and the story from which importance concerned with the person and the person is being learned by living there together.
The form they gather round a share house. And that Takeru and others who hold a hate sense are growing into a lady is drawn by a sweetheart with Michiru using violence and Ruka which has worries of a mind and body for the contents of this drama. Michiru begins to be attracted by Takeru soon. But Takeru informs Ruka about feelings. Though social problem is caught, it's speaking which drew love with which the young peoples.
I saw this story, and found such speaking real actually really. And I could make them think it's the problem that they're close. So I want everyone to see this drama by all means, too.
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